Umm I loled at "scenester whore" so thumbs up on that. I also liked the demonstration of Patrick's singing.
Overall, cute idea. Lacked something in the execution though. You used Movie Maker for creds so you might wanna throw the whole thing up on a time line and edit it the next time. There are some inacuracies here and there but someone already corrected the pronunciation of decaydance so ...
Hah, I agree. I said some shit that I looked back and said, "Oh geez. Why didn't she edit that?"
Oh ho, there was tons of shit that happened that will definitely be fixed later on. Thanks for pointing it out a lot, too! We're using a different camera next time (MORE MEGAPIXELS <3) and we have an actual outline for the next episode (totally agree on lack of direction for... most of the episode). I really hope you stay tuned for our next, definitely better, episode.